pitch deck review
Most pitch decks lose investors before slide three.
Not because the idea is bad. Because the story isn't clear, the structure buries the lead, or the deck answers questions investors aren't asking yet.
I've sat on both sides of the table — as a founder who's raised capital and as an angel investor who's reviewed hundreds of decks. I know exactly where founders lose the room, and how to fix it.
For $250, I'll review your deck personally and give you the kind of feedback that's actually useful: specific, direct, and actionable.
What you get
Slide-by-slide written feedback Comments on every slide — what's landing, what's confusing, and what's missing. Not vague observations. Specific, fixable notes.
Narrative and structure assessment Most deck problems are story problems. I'll tell you whether your narrative flows the way an investor's mind works, and how to tighten it if it doesn't
An investor's honest verdict I'll tell you whether I'd take a follow-up meeting based on this deck — and more importantly, why. That's the only feedback that actually matters.
Suggestions you can act on immediately No jargon, no fluff. You'll walk away knowing exactly what to change before you hit send.
This is for you if…
You're a first-time founder preparing for your first raise and want a sharp second opinion before you start outreach
You've been sending your deck out and getting silence — and you want to know why
You've just finished a new version and want a gut-check from someone who's been through this before
You want honest feedback, not sugarcoated encouragement
How it works
Submit your deck — PDF or shared link, whichever works for you
I review it personally — no outsourcing, no AI summary, just me reading it the way an investor would
You receive written feedback within 3–5 business days — detailed comments you can take straight into your next revision
One-time fee: $250
Frequently asked questions
Do you review decks at any stage? Primarily pre-seed and seed. That's where the deck does the most work — you're asking investors to take a bet on you before there's much proof, so the story and structure have to be airtight.
What format should I send the deck in? PDF is ideal, or a view-only link (Canva, Google Slides, Figma — whatever you're working in). I'll review it as-is; no need to clean it up first.
Will you help me rewrite the deck, or just review it? This service is focused review and feedback — you'll have everything you need to revise it yourself. If you want hands-on help rebuilding the deck or a deeper capital raising engagement, book a free intro call and we can talk about what that looks like.
How is this different from getting feedback from a friend or mentor? Most feedback founders get is too polite to be useful. I'll tell you what's actually not working — because that's what helps you raise.